To my fellow Americans, Happy Independence Day!
To my fellow planetary citizens, Happy Fourth of July (& fifth, sixth, ...)!
In honor of this country's independence, I'm setting my break-away from prepositional phrases at the forefront. (How many did you count in that sentence?)
Hi, my name is Ellen, and I am a prep-phrase-aholic.
Don't get me wrong, these adorable word compositions have their place in your writing. They also take up your word count.
First, a definition.
The trick--as with all writing techniques--is to know when to use them and when to not. What works for me might not work for you, but here's what I do.
First, I write. With abandon. Don't look back. Kick that inner grammar critic in the family jewels until you've finished. Then, when you are editing, call her back and make friends.
That's when you search out filter words, overused phrases, extra adverbs and adjectives, and all the other flowery stuff that gets in the way of your story. It's my experience that once I bring such grammatical situations to my attention, I can hunt them down. They sort of pop up like metal ducks at a shooting range. Some I catch, some I don't. But practice makes perfect, right?
I'll work on weeding out overused prepositional phrases in my writing, will you?
That's my story, what's yours?